Without Law: Book 11

I am really struggling to understand the rational the author presented in this book regarding Brody. The team has no qualms about killing whole groups of people whose only \”crime\” was attempting to steal stuff or be about scavenging like they are. However, Brody is all of a sudden given a mental health \”pass\” after killing a truck full of innocent women… It just makes no sense at all, especially how the team reacted afterward. It is beyond irresponsible and unbelievably dangerous to not only leave him alive but to also snub him and give him a reason to resent the team when he has obviously been looking into where they are living… ugh

This series has been one of my favorites up till now. I knew that things were starting to go sideways when \”He who was too much of a threat to ignore\” made his debut in the last book. However the ending of this book killed the faith I had in the main Character\’s abilities to do what needs to be done in a world Without Law. Any person who threatens the safety of inoccent people needs to be ended one way or another or else they will continue to do so. Is Tav such a person to leave such a person alive and with so much power over the life and wellbeing of so many people. I am very disappointed in the actions of our Characters and the Direction of the story. And given the strategic importance of The Fort and the Refinery does it not occur to anyone that \”He who was too much of a threat to ignore\” is going to be a major player in the region and a deadly enemy to leave alive.

Well everything about this review is a spoiler soooo….. So um nothing really happens in this book to further the story line in any way really and its a shame because this series is one of my favorites of Eric vall. But I just don\’t get the way they didn\’t kill Brody I mean they taked about it several times in the book like it was a forgone conclusion. I mean they killed the 3 trucks full of guys at the beginning with out even knowing if they were bad ppl but not brody. They killed the canables and they for shur had a mental illness but not brody. And I mean they said they will never see him again but the last two books they have been so concerned about fuel and brody controls the fuel how will they not see him again? There are just so many holes in the caricatures personalities in this one. And besides the brody thing literally nothing happens in this book to further the main groups plot line. Radio broadcast…… nothing new. Fuel issues……. nothing new. North Korea plot….. nothing new. Ps. Why was this one the standard length it feels like it was missing about 7hr more of content based on the previously mentioned issues.

So much forced and unnatural drama. Unnecessary page fluff. Massive plot-armor moments where the bad guys acted just the way necessary for the good guys to win. Multiple times where everything was just on pause till the main character had their \”Oh yeah!\” moment. The characters unable to make the most obvious logical connections. Overall just irritating lazy writing. Not sure if I\’ll continue the series after this debacle.

This series has had me from the start and the more that goes on the more you fall in love with the characters.

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