Grey Sister (Book of the Ancestor #2)

I\’m currently most of the way through the 3rd book, which says something about the quality if I\’m willing to continue with the series, but I think my opinion of this story has declined the more I read/listen. I\’ll try to avoid major spoilers. I\’ll list my gripes in order of importance/annoyance. This is my review of the story so far, not solely this book of the trilogy. There are some very well written scenes and engaging action sequences. The world that the author has created is quite interesting and has so much potential for interesting interactions. The end of the world through an ice age with an ever-thinning strip of land cleared by ancient technology? Some small scale magics and special abilities that are diverse and interesting? An order of warrior nuns? This is all adding up to be novel and interesting, but then the problems begin: 1. Plot The characters spend most of their time with pointless rivalries and small-ball intrigues while the world is ending. The momentous, \”how can we save the world\” plot-line is lost in in-fighting between parties that it\’s never established why they dislike one another, or why they couldn\’t set that aside for a day to try the only solution to the world ending that we\’ve heard about, which sounds really simple to at least try. Spoiler: By the third book a decade has passed and the potential solution to the world ending has been sitting on the figurative shelf for that entire time and nobody has even tried to implement it. I guess they couldn\’t find a couple people who would want to cooperate just for a minute to see if it worked? The plot motif of: 1) meet school rival, 2) fight and hate each other, 3) gain mutual respect and friendship literally happens the exact same way 3 or 4 times with different people the main character meets. It\’s just repetitive and annoying. There\’s also a big logical flaw at one point (minor spoiler): there are some tunnels that the Abbess declares off-limits because they are too dangerous for students. Nona is caught trespassing, and the penalty will be… death. That\’s right, the penalty for trespassing somewhere dangerous is death. 2. Characters New characters are introduced and they are just evil, and others are good, and significant reasons for conflict and feelings are glossed over. The guy who wants to sentence Nona to death just automatically hates her and wants her dead. The details and reasons aren\’t really mentioned, something vague about a bribe? But how does that add up to visceral hate? Nona kills a guy\’s brother. That guy should want revenge and be angry at her, but instead of making him at all sympathetic or complex, he\’s just a total sadist. So was the brother, so is the dad, so is pretty much everyone who gets in the main character\’s way. It\’s way too heavy-handed and lacks any nuance. Then there\’s Nona, who switches between bloodthirsty super-warrior and schoolgirl every time her mood shifts and it gets pretty disconcerting when she\’s just murdered 12 soldiers with her bare hands and then is all, \’oh gosh they might kick me out of school\’ for some minor transgression. That\’s just jarring. When another student tries to sabotage, poison, or murder her and she just whines and says \’gosh how will I ever deal with this\’ after she was just bathing in some dude\’s blood last chapter. It doesn\’t make any sense. 3. Scenes There are some obvious Harry Potter parallels because these are young people in a school for magic, but Harry Potter had a big over-arching story that all the little scenes played into. They have defense against the dark arts and Snape hates Harry for a REASON. Classroom scenes show pieces of the plot falling together and teachers challenge the students or put them at risk very seldom and for reasons that make sense. In this book they are so inconsistent and there are just random classroom scenes that don\’t contribute to the plot or significant character development, plus teachers needlessly put characters at risk with no benefit or reason to it. It\’s just very ham-fisted. If you ask, \’why was this scene in the book\’ you would have a hard time coming up with a reason for a lot of scenes and even the sub-plots. 4. Magic The magic powers start out very subtle and very rare, but by book three they\’re throwing powers around that are way overpowered, and then characters are stymied by the simplest obstacles. You\’re thinking along the lines of, \’you just were shooting fireballs and blasting things last chapter, now you can\’t light a candle?\’ (not those things literally, but enough to break immersion). A lot of inconsistency and unsatisfying use of magic. And people born with these supposedly rare powers seem to be coming out of the woodwork throughout. 5. Writing The prose is actually pretty good; sentence seem well constructed and individual scenes play out neatly and are generally well paced, aside from the end of book 2 which was kind of a mess. 6. Reading The reader mispronounces a couple words. The one that springs to mind is \’archon\’, with a \’ch\’ like \’chance\’. There are a smattering of others as well. Overall they do a great job, except for one character in book 2 who is represented with the most annoying, high-pitched voice. My main complaints are about making the characters deeper and consistent and making the plot cohesive and momentous, instead of dealing so much with the trivial. I think the world is great and new and has so much potential for interesting stories, but that potential just isn\’t explored enough.

We have all read books like this before. A child from some forgotten town is discovered to have some power or gift. Swifted away to some school or monastery to learn their powers before galloping off on a quest to save the world, collecting friends and tropes to help, protect, and die along the way. The heroe\’s powers gather as he/she battles the the forces of evil, a corrupt church, or corrupt monarchy. Grey Sister, and The Books of the Ancestor series, follows along this path we have read many times before. You would think that would be the recipe for a average story with no hope of originality. So how does Author Mark Lawrence manage to weave a great story within the confines of a well used fantasy theme? It starts with the main protagonist Nona Grey, the heroin of this story. Nona is not your common farm girl/boy who discovers that she has some awesome power bestowed to her and feels the need to do right and save the world. Nona\’s loyalties belong only to her desire for revenge, and the need to protect the only friends she has ever had. Nona is no pure hearted savior with any feeling of obligation to be humanity\’s protector, she is angry, and the heat of that anger drives her. It is this that makes Nona almost a anti-hero, the opposite of the usual noble savior of all that is good type protagonist that is the norm of this type of fantasy story. This is what separates The Books of the Ancestor series most of all. Nona Grey drives this story, and although she may not be the virtue of saintliness usually required to save the world, you can\’t help but feel she will accomplish it just the same. The narration from Heather O\’Niell seemed to improve for me this time around. I\’m not sure if that is because she actually improved, or if I have just become used to her as the voices of these characters. She still remains a bit screechy for some male parts, but I enjoyed the performance. Overall, Grey Sister is one of my favorite books so far this year. Maybe not a new theme for a fantasy series, but definitely a familiar setting shined up to make something wholly better. Can\’t wait for the next book.

Book one was a gem , grey sister got lost in translation seems the author just wrote this one for the check, sorry can’t do book three even though I love Nona……..

First of all I just want to state that I loved this book. If you enjoyed the first one this one will be no different. My only complaint is that it slightly suffers from “book 2 syndrome” being that plot points are left dangling for the future, cryptic messages are stated at the literal end, and the climax occurs to close to the end of the story instead of easing you out. I know I went heavy on my explanations of the negatives but on a whole I really did love this book, I just hate how long I’ll have to wait to get the next one

I was incredibly bored with nothing happening of interest until 5 hours in. And then still mostly boredom until the last few hours. Which still suffered from moments of boredom. The first problem I suppose is that the author failed to manage expectations. I almost never had any positive expectations, instead it was always either for example with the monster which should have caught my interest but didn\’t \’uh huh,I predict the frying pan will not be used, and whatever happens will be boring\’ not sure why I felt this way, but I just didnt have the feeling it would be interesting. Or like with the painfully obvious manipulations, it had all the fun of watching someone in a horror movie slow walking towards their prredictable death at the end of a hallway. Exceot instead of high tension \”No No No!\” It was a low tension \”Just get it over with\” And the second, maybe biggest problem, is the way the author constantly, incessently reiterated things. At the end of the book, the excitment tended to stop for instance to wait for apple yo re-explain how much information flows to her and how. And thats just one example. It happened over and over and over and over and over and over again. And not abbreviated reminders either, but always nearly the entire bit retold in full. And I think by the end of the book the entire first book ended up recapped despite the author\’s foreward insisting he wanted to avoid that.

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