Dark World

The story is barely understandable. The translator has a poor mastery of English and it shows. This is not a professional product.

I read the first book before I dived into this book. This book is well written. There are minor translation errors but nothing that jarred me out of the narrative. I found the book to action packed and had no problems following the MC as he had further adventures. I liked that this book was longer than the first book. I really like the non-human characters he brings into the mix. I definitely will be reading book 3 when it gets translated. I hope there is a book 3 already written or due to translated.

I can’t belive no one else wrote this but the book goes from chapter 13 to chapter 16, and its not a sequence error,we are obviously missing a good chunk of the story.
I love the story, please fix it!

The first book in this series was entertaining and translated well enough. Book 2 however suffers from a terrible translation that will leave you wondering what’s going on most of the time.

I really am enjoying the series but it does seem a little disjointed at times. Feel like the characters keep getting side tracked and dont follow up on issues. I hope this is only because it is already several book ahead and just need to catch up to the story further along.

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